loki
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God of Mischeif...and sprites.
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Post by loki on Oct 8, 2006 19:44:05 GMT -5
 this is my first one. I'll post my second one in the next post. |
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loki
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God of Mischeif...and sprites.
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Post by loki on Oct 8, 2006 19:45:43 GMT -5
 this is the second one. The line from Pat at the end is an in-joke between Shi, Pat, and myself from out time at Otakon '06 |
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loki
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God of Mischeif...and sprites.
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Post by loki on Oct 8, 2006 21:08:12 GMT -5
 Here is installment #3 of what I have newly named, the Adventures of SnL  |
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Post by shikagemaru on Oct 8, 2006 21:55:20 GMT -5
LoL I actually really like it.
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Post by H-Chan on Oct 8, 2006 22:48:22 GMT -5
Note: I moved this topic to general, because the Fanworks section is meant to be used for fanart and fanfic related Broken Glass. There hasn't been a need for me to make a forum for fanart or fanfic dedicated to anything else, so it's temporarily here. It may stay here if I don't decide to create more forums.
Another thing, please don't double (or in this case, triple) post. You could have easily put all of those in one message. And when you wanted to add the last one, all you had to do was hit "edit." Just something to keep in mind. ^^
I know I already told you, but I love the comics. Very funny. ^_^
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loki
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God of Mischeif...and sprites.
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Post by loki on Oct 9, 2006 20:43:58 GMT -5
and now for comics number 4 and 5!   Please, give me feedback. I need opinions. What have I done wrong? What have I done right? Does anything need to be explained? |
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Post by H-Chan on Oct 11, 2006 22:18:09 GMT -5
LOL. Tree.
Very nice. XDXD
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loki
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God of Mischeif...and sprites.
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Post by loki on Oct 13, 2006 0:22:14 GMT -5
...seriously. I need more feedback. does anyone have ANYTHING negative to say? I'm actually kinda scared that nothing negative has been said. no work is that perfect on it's first try.
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Post by H-Chan on Oct 13, 2006 11:32:12 GMT -5
I can't really critique sprite comics because I've never worked with them. ^^; The bright backgrounds are a little blinding, maybe... tone those down a bit? Not even that big a deal! But that's all I can really think of. x___x Sorry.
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THE COLORS!!!
